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林谷龍
萬聖節的甜密。

知硯不是回沈家了嗎？不是要捉三個人才能把換回。
5 months agoReply
Zhen
是的，但那是正文，這章主要是他們慶祝萬聖節哈哈哈
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@Zhen,哦哦哦！了解。
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@Zhen,也不換個甜色系的封面，妳這是愛情甜劇，以這麽好的內心詮釋戲，都嘛能霸幫前幾名。
5 months agoReply
Zhen
@林谷龍,啊？！真的嗎？哈哈哈數據不是很理想，我以為自己寫得不好 kkk
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@Zhen,寫得很有水準啦！
5 months agoReply
Zhen
@林谷龍,哈哈哈謝謝大大鼓勵！
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@Zhen,kkk
5 months agoReply
原子能
【房間內"黑壓壓"一片】建議=>"黑漆漆"。「黑壓壓」多用來形容人群或烏雲，形容黑暗的房間用「黑漆漆」好像會更好一點。
6 months agoReply
Zhen
好的，感谢大大提醒！
6 months agoReply
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