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子不語 sponsored 500coins for Issue 44!
打賞給小魚，我也喜歡帥帥的女生 XD
8 months agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝～當初入坑就是因為阿速卡
8 months agoReply
TING
其實我的打戲不算有參考價值，不要向我學，因為這個東西是我很弱的部分，最近重看依然覺得很弱，我自己仍在摸索學習中🥲不過很高興有成功吸引到小魚的眼球🥹

當初會用拉丁文的咒語是因為想配合西方的魔法，原本有考慮過要不要寫中文，但最後還是想保持一點神秘感XDDDDD

阿速卡很帥有同感，能打的女生都很有魅力，雖然我比較喜歡她擁有像媽媽一樣的保護慾😆

在此謝謝小魚的參與❤️
8 months agoReply
小魚一尾
沒關係，打戲這部分怎麼寫都比我強qwq（蹲角落）
8 months agoReply
TING
@小魚一尾,加油，一起學習🤝🏻
8 months agoReply
子不語
Ting Ting過謙了，妳的打戲很有畫面感（尤其是小莎的踢技跟大叔的魔法，畫面感十足，在讀者腦海裡跟電影似的）
8 months agoReply
TING
@子不語,謝謝子不語，被真正的大佬稱讚覺得很感動🥹
8 months agoReply
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