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筆仔
林泉想法太消極了。也很難說，太想媽媽吧！

草沙，「原來這狼妖王……」這一段，我覺得是否要有赤娜的一些對話呢？
2 years agoReply
草沙
哈哈哈，畢竟學生，還沒那麼獨立。

需要對話嗎？是感覺不順還是......？我思考看看
2 years agoReply
阿掌
赤娜重新自我介紹那段，「從」新介紹，應為「重」。
3 years agoReply
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