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茶粿
但，見，淡，三個字讀音都差不多，用普通話讀起來好像繞口令。可否改為猶見？或之類的其它。。。
2 months agoReply
虛冲
但、見、淡都是去聲，普通話只有一個去聲，這個我沒想到。
但是廣東話有陰去和陽去兩聲，所以讀來又沒普通話般繞口🤔
2 months agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,或者不改前面，淡輝改成薄輝如何？ 怕是又不符合平仄。。。
2 months agoReply
虛冲
@茶粿, 薄是入聲字，所以符合仄聲的
但是薄暉來容易令人想到薄熙來🙊
2 months agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,古體詩好難寫。。。
2 months agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,我不管平仄了，班門弄斧一下，改成：

空山早霧重　但見朝暉來
聚散兩悄然　群芳次第開
2 months agoReply
虛冲
@茶粿, 王維的詩也有不少不理平仄，是我在意平仄而已，別執着XD
2 months agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,古人的平仄應該也是有原因的，為了讀起來朗朗上口。
2 months agoReply
虛冲
@茶粿, 我很喜歡使用「悄然」這個詞
2 months agoReply
虛冲
@茶粿, 也是慢慢發展出來，由唐開始發展出格律詩斟酌平仄，不過也會有不論平仄的古詩。
2 months agoReply
茶粿
@虛冲,明白。
2 months agoReply
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