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蕩步詩人
囂張的對聯，反覆的語氣⋯⋯嗯！錯不了，那確實是我！

鶴兄文筆爐火純青，在下無可淺論。

對於背景的描寫和內心的起伏皆令人好生佩服。

好啦～雖然被打的是我～但我也笑了
5 years agoReply
放鶴
詩人兄過獎啦～下次讓你打回去！www
5 years agoReply
蕩步詩人
@放鶴,啊⋯⋯小弟不計較這個～如果可以。打嵐靈是個好活動～哈哈哈
5 years agoReply
嵐靈
辛苦了~
5 years agoReply
放鶴
不會不會 我開玩笑的🤣
5 years agoReply
琉璃異色貓
琉璃門凌貓兒……好名好名🙈

I am your father....快把我笑死了😂😂😂
5 years agoReply
放鶴
有人懂星戰梗耶🤣🤣🤣寫得超歡樂的~
5 years agoReply
琉璃異色貓
@放鶴, 我也看得很歡樂🤣 不過鳥被踢下山崖為甚麼不會飛回去？(別打我)
5 years agoReply
放鶴
@琉璃異色貓,他是太震驚了🤣🤣🤣 不過只是失蹤啦 (*ˉ︶ˉ*) 就當是沒面目見兒子吧
5 years agoReply
有無餘
哈哈哈哈哈不啊我覺得很搞笑啊


5 years agoReply
放鶴
哈哈~寫得歡樂 但沒專注搞笑www 謝謝欣賞🤣🤣🤣
5 years agoReply
魅影
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
鶴弟寫得好呀！！！
5 years agoReply
放鶴
謝謝魅姐(●°u°●)​ 」
5 years agoReply
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