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黑心小兔
故事的開頭的確選的不好，
又想快點修仙、又想好好交代俗世和動機，
兩頭不討好！

女主腦內想的太多，行動展現個性過少、
山上情節搞不清她現在是誰幾歲等等，
會讓人閱讀困惑的地方，我再順看看。

謝謝四位大大的評論，我會好好再看幾遍的！
再次謝謝這個活動~(❤️)
8 months agoReply
不眠草
可以在開頭就看到小兔的企圖心w 小兔加油
8 months agoReply
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