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玼瑕 sponsored 500coins for Issue 421!
這部我第一集就直接棄追了，劇情編排的問題雖然還看不出來，但給人一種編劇沒法好好講述故事的感覺，看起來像是拼湊了很多王道作品的元素，但沒有適當梳理顯得非常累贅拖踏。
1 year agoReply
黑霧
謝謝打賞：）

太厲害了，第一集就看出那麼多ＯＲＺ
我自己覺得第一集還可以，雖然不是值得期待，但感覺肯走穩定王道應該能看的，結果……咳咳
1 year agoReply
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