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宅米蟲子
為什麼是聽雨在說什麼？
2 years agoReply
夢生
她睡懵了以為自己還在上一個時空，在聽雨身邊w
結果醒來後發現已經在家裡了，是南星在說話～
2 years agoReply
夢生
@夢生,ummm 看來要補充一下轉折
2 years agoReply
宅米蟲子
@夢生,有，我後來想通了，不過聲音應該不一樣w
2 years agoReply
夢生
@宅米蟲子, 已補(=´∀｀)人(´∀｀=) 謝謝宅子的留言><
2 years agoReply
宅米蟲子
@夢生,其實如果你覺得原本的表達方式比較好的話不用特地改的QQ
2 years agoReply
夢生
@宅米蟲子, 當然需要改啊，讓讀者閱讀誤會了，就是我沒表達好啊xDD 所以很感謝分享讀後感真的，不然留在那，後續肯定有其他一起誤會的人lol （要是還有讀者的話⋯⋯）
2 years agoReply
宅米蟲子
@夢生,不是每個讀者都跟我一樣笨(._.)
2 years agoReply
夢生
@宅米蟲子, 但每一章節，宅子都用心看完了啊QQ 所以只要宅子沒看懂的就是要改的，必須要改的> < 
2 years agoReply
宅米蟲子
@夢生,我後來有看懂啦(´・ω・｀)
2 years agoReply
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