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麻黃
我也覺得寫得很好，海跟天的意象有被很完整的運用！
而且前面還會覺得憑什麼說兩人永遠無法靠近，覺得未免太過武斷，不過情節的安排倒使直覺成讖。

個人討厭死別那裡（個人問題），啊冰冷的接觸覺得有點毛毛。
但是結尾那段寫得很好，很喜歡QQ用小巧可愛的篇幅完成了創挑的條件，還是以前的作品，有點厲害呢！
7 years agoReply
黑客_HEIDY
沒想到能獲得麻黃的評價XD
我自己現在回頭去閱讀也覺得只有結尾那段文字收得算漂亮。（其他地方實在很想通通改掉，哈哈哈）
7 years agoReply
麻黃
@HEIDY, 不會啊，覺得原汁原味很棒啊！我因為之前忙了一會所以晚回了>3<
7 years agoReply
露娜仙仙
寫得相當好呢，非常棒！
7 years agoReply
黑客_HEIDY
啊天哪～真是過獎了，但我放上來之前還在猶豫要不要修改過的，不過想想這也是當作以前剛投入寫作的一種過程，就直接改都沒改就放了，哈哈哈有點害羞(つд⊂)
7 years agoReply
露娜仙仙
@HEIDY,^^對於感情的描述很細膩，我相當的喜歡唷！
7 years agoReply
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