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神奇慧婷OuO
你好！我終於加料了！你說得對！第五章的鋪墊太少了，今晚內搞定，你起床後應該就會看到更新了hhh
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
有！我看見了！
這樣就好多了，節奏很剛好～
這樣淑蓮情緒爆發就不會太顯突兀，女兒的關懷與媽媽的恐懼成了全文焦點。
很高興我的書評有幫助到你！
3 months agoReply
神奇慧婷OuO
謝謝你的書評！我稍後再改，我現在有點累😂，改完告訴你讓你看看～
4 months agoReply
晨星．死神
沒關係的不急！謝謝你~
4 months agoReply
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