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林墨
整部作品只有一句對話(手語不算)，卻又說了千言萬語。
而且全是Show，沒有Tell。
很高明的敘事手法啊!

果然決賽圈很不簡單。
6 months agoReply
落某九
谢谢嗷 林墨大也很厉害 有种在看韩漫的感觉：D 
6 months agoReply
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