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六角沒用
感謝四位老師的心得與建議！(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

看來我還是太貪心、想練習和想實驗的項目太多了，以及為了得到世界觀可行性方面的意見，硬是把應該分散在七、八話的資訊量塞在五話內。

目前已經把各位的建議及想在後續看見的議題探討分門別類，會在調整大綱之後把目前進度砍掉重練🤣

我需要練習及加強的部分太多，如果能趕上比賽是最好的結果，不能的話，至少寫完還能投明年大賞。

再次感謝四位老師用愛發電提供的幫助，希望活動順利圓滿！
8 months agoReply
不眠草
被喊老師還是覺得怪怪ㄉ，因為並沒有教學什麼，只是寫寫心得而已~ 我覺得六角的心態超級強，不管未來嘗試什麼樣的作品一定都會成功的♡♡♡
8 months agoReply
六角沒用
@不眠草, 師者，所以傳道、授業、解惑也😎
我覺得你們有解到我的疑惑，尊稱一聲老師ok的啦(⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧
借不眠吉言囉(⁠・⁠∀⁠・⁠)✨愛你💖
8 months agoReply
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