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林墨
感覺文風有點變化，是嘗試新的寫法嗎?
還是我多慮了?
1 month agoReply
語者
對哇 一直在調 一直沒有定下來自己認為完美的文風QQ
1 month agoReply
朝花夕拾 sponsored 500coins for Issue 41!
很喜歡這章。
2 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
我們小瑪雅吃醋了耶，雷恩大木頭還不知道麼？

跟雷恩這樣的人對手戲，感覺很累又有趣？他可以輕易知道情緒的數值，卻不知道這情緒的意涵啊～
2 months agoReply
小魚一尾
我差點以為他們要告白了（被打
4 months agoReply
語者
哈哈 本來也是把這裡的感情戲加重 但好像加太重 變成雷恩上去一個大跳🤣🤣
4 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@語者,喜歡感情戲的我好激動，結果下一秒他流鼻血了XD
4 months agoReply
世水
這是New Version吧👀💭？

好像是加深了雷恩和瑪雅之間的情感互動🤔
還有這次「雙重人格」變得非常清晰😮
4 months agoReply
語者
沒錯XDD
之前太霸總人設了，這裡是另外一個人設XDD
這個雙重人格的出場才是這個章節我主要要做的，感情戲的加速之前太硬要了
4 months agoReply
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