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原子能
原來不是單純的綁架，而是古早時期的地球主事者們自己簽的賣身契啊！這世界觀補得可以，把伊森的行為從單純的加害者，洗成有點像在執行古老條約的公務員了。
7 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
具有皇子身份的高級公務員（蓋章
7 months agoReply
原子能

【結果幾天"后"就下不了手】簡體=>幾天"後"
【歐森放下了正在"乘"湯的湯匙】不確定是不是錯字=>"盛"湯
【「不是綁架…”」】多了一個雙引號
7 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
感謝原子能大大幫抓蟲！超需要的！自己看都會漏……
7 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
改好了！謝謝你！！
7 months agoReply
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