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感謝！（再次跪拜）
關於描述場景的問題啊，老實說過去有一段時間我曾被人說過贅字贅詞太多，所以在寫這部作品時反倒變成會盡量去省略一些場景或是人物外表的描述，看來是我比例沒抓好（抱頭）。

很謝謝你的評論～



1 year agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
不客氣喔。
1 year agoReply
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