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藍橋春雪
例子都好有年代感，要克制不要寫細的慾望真的很難，尤其是腦海裡有某個想明確呈現的畫面時。
1 month agoReply
子不語
我早期都寫超細，然後整體鏡頭就變慢了 XD
現在除非有很確實的理由，我會加速很多為優先
1 month agoReply
朗星
寫超好，真的獲益良多，瘋狂寫筆記～～
謝謝大大的教學
剛好最近也需要寫打戲，之前有查過資料但都迷迷糊糊不太清楚
這篇直接補足～～
1 month agoReply
子不語
其實我這篇也是筆記，好像也是組合了好幾篇的心得影片的筆記 XD

大家互相學習～
1 month agoReply
周輝
我寫開武打的，但其實也沒什麼概念。今次受益良多了，拱手謝過！
1 year agoReply
子不語
不客氣！你的超武鬥組寫打戲寫得很好啊！剛好帶出畫面感，但又不會太瑣碎，很值得學！
1 year agoReply
周輝
@子不語,過獎了，但願看完你的教學後，我能再多多進步
1 year agoReply
小魚一尾
……腦力不足，寫不出太多招數動作，所以這是我寫打戲的優勢嗎?（心虛
1 year agoReply
子不語
直接飽以老拳！ XD
1 year agoReply
感謝，受益良多。
1 year agoReply
子不語
不客氣～～～
1 year agoReply
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