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翡翠
你的"水"指的是劇情嗎!?我看是覺得不會。
4 years agoReply
沙發王的故事
我很喜歡一群人各自發現一些小細節，藉此烘托出一個大事件的感覺（群像劇的概念？），但是我又怕因為要各自描寫他們的想法、行為、發現會拖延到劇情

因為一般都是「主角團」一起發現線索，要推進故事就相當快，但是我覺得這樣子一個事件就少了發生前的宏大、壯闊的感覺（也有可能是我不會描寫？）

當然，兩種手法各有各的好處。
4 years agoReply
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