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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
感覺是強烈的告白，但什麼情況下會想「一百次」的告白？拒絕？沒有回應？一百次的意外而收不到告白？自我滿足？有很多可能性，但介紹語中感到輕微的不滿，要滿足的是對方或是自己？我覺得這個故事可以有別出心栽的發展空間。

雖然... ...我想應該也是一般的愛情故事，期望會有更多驚喜。
「一次真愛追尋一百次」「一百零一次求婚」... ...哈哈哈~
6 years agoReply
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
其實... ...簡稱可否短一點？你的簡稱比起其他作品的正名還要長呢~~
6 years agoReply
沒名
噢！可以的！
6 years agoReply
欠我一粒甘栗
青春真好！
6 years agoReply
麻黃
好像有印象......
6 years agoReply
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