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嗨～ @諾蒂西亞，書評已經寫好，希望對你有幫助！
3 hours agoReply
諾蒂西亞
感謝您的建議，進一步受到肯定也很高興
本來這只是一部正傳卡住然後拿着設定寫出來的小外傳作品，但感覺看起來也不錯

可惜現在寫得太長了，在第二部的結尾卡住了又
第二部也因為很後面，所以沒收到什麼建議🤣
20 minutes agoReply
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