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凝雨 sponsored 338coins for Issue 40!
祝你馬上有錢，福氣滿滿！
4 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
謝謝你☺️☺️☺️☺️
4 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
肉文的部分……要到第十章才會出現好像。引號和刪節號的部分，在第二次校稿的時候都改了XD 

,剛開始的時候比較群像，後面才會聚焦到主角，先查案才會相遇

我在蕉園上還沒改……因為想先把電子書弄完，改收費才改XD 
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
你居然讓我看還沒改的～過分～～ＸＤＤＤ
6 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
@朝晞Ashinari ,對不機！！！！！我後來發現蕉園的前面好像是原稿呢……因為標點符號的部分，我一校就改過了。（一次po太多網站，po到頭暈目眩）

我好想知道你對那個H的看法呀！（早知道直接標h章），怕口味太重，嚇到你
6 months agoReply
朝晞Ashinari
@冬季貓貓蟲,你應該把Ｈ往前拉～（誤）
6 months agoReply
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