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一口人
以下純綷討論，無意挑戰。
其實第三人稱有限視點這種寫法有一個名為自由間接引語的概念，不知道falabilaba有沒有聽說過？
5 months agoReply
falabilaba
謝了，原來有專有名詞可以稱呼。不然實在講不出我在說啥東西。
5 months agoReply
一口人
我的意思是，這個自由間接引語運用得好不好/適合不適合是一回事（事實上我也有好一些位置用得不合乎規範），但個人認為某些情況下這不是人稱混亂，而是刻意應用了這個行之有年寫作技巧的結果。
5 months agoReply
榨掉葡萄乾
@一口人,自由間接引語是文學級的寫作方式，像村上春樹也會使用，不是人稱混亂ㄛ~
5 months agoReply
一口人
很詳細的心得，辛苦了。

請問一下解釋太多是專指最後一章(暴走章節)嗎？還是前幾章已經有這種情况?
5 months agoReply
falabilaba
我直接開一篇跟你解釋
5 months agoReply
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