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凌步
好特別的敍事方式，看似平淡卻每個情節都直撃心底，餘韻無窮。

「沒有人知道這裡死過一個靈魂。」這一句我覺得最有感，讀到的時候真的心底低呼了一聲。
6 months agoReply
林墨
故事是雙線進行。
為了敘述流暢，才把背景設定在近未來，加入科技系統可以自動整理出脈絡，讓讀者閱讀起來更輕鬆。
希望達到切換場景時毫無違和感的效果，甚至讓人感覺不到雙線的存在。
6 months agoReply
凌步
@林墨, 非常順暢且毫無違和感，我覺得你的構思很成功！
6 months agoReply
林墨
@凌步,太好了。我希望不只是參加創挑，也能讓讀者們享受這個作品。
6 months agoReply
落某九
两位大大…都好厉害…我有点紧张了（
6 months agoReply
林墨
有刺激才會進步 😉
6 months agoReply
林墨
很期待看到《逐火》，感覺很適合寫成希望的故事。
目前決賽兩篇都是黑暗系的作品，希望Kikii看了不會心情太差😗
6 months agoReply
kikii
@林墨, 不會差啦（笑
我反而很高興創挑能讓大家多創作w
6 months agoReply
落某九
猜的好准（林墨大是预言家吗XDD
@林墨,
6 months agoReply
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