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嵐斕
@沈昀
10 months agoReply
沈昀
哇呀！感謝嵐斕大大評文💜

翻譯腔的習慣我自己也是小困擾，但如果文筆看起來還算流暢（或甚至像特意為之）那就太好了哈哈

沒有超譯！要的就是這種衝擊感✨

至於插入回憶的部分，我自己也覺得稍微有點突兀，但目前還找不到其他更好的表達方式，我再來想想看🙏

再次感謝大大花時間心力的評文，辛苦了💜
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
@沈昀,(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)b
10 months agoReply
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