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菜根
@殺出血路  8/22終結，請選擇AI製圖角色。
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
男主角吧，不要弄太帥，陰陰的平凡人就好(要符合設定
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路,OK~
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
@菜根,最後來個完結感想吧
其實這個故事絕不是走王道爽文的，因為主角天生身體素質的嚴重不足，所以注定他不會是強者。(因為我鋪排不好才會令菜根大大誤會，主角不是那種龍傲天的存在

金句方面，每一章也有些梗，或最後轉折點都會有些金句。只是不太起眼了，大大猜得沒錯，在半路上那句，的確是貫穿全文的中心句子。(32章獨白有再出現，之後預定也會有

4分這個成績，不是最差已經很好了
(先不說了，回家後繼續努力改進和碼字啦
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路, 如果已經知道要改稿的，選擇不爬塔會比較好0.0~
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路 8/17更新~
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
水份還陸續有來呢(完蛋了
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路,大拇指~
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路,8/20更新
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
@菜根, 血條消失發動了嗎？
我要看到血流成河！
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路, 笑死XD
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
佔位！
10 months agoReply
菜根
8/14更新~
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
@菜根, 抱歉，鎅刀是香港比較常用的用語🥲
台灣是叫美工刀嗎？
(一血沒有了
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路, 還以為是什麼特殊金屬刀之類的@@真是學到了~呼呼~
10 months agoReply
殺出血路
@菜根, 感謝大佬的平反！
10 months agoReply
菜根
@殺出血路, 不是大佬~是菜根阿~
10 months agoReply
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