I’m rereading the whole dang thing because you said something about “Cameo hinting at the betrayal” one time and I WANNA KNOW THESE HINTS And I’m now realizing the beginning of the story was a little too fast-paced. Just a quick critique ^^
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And I’m now realizing the beginning of the story was a little too fast-paced. Just a quick critique ^^