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i think this was an interesting story but you have too many numbers and say the word clone too many times. It's too blatant for me.

10 years agoReply

Greenjay Reader

I really did write "clone" too much. But they're clones, eh? I would
like to think it can work. The numbers are the names/identification of
the clones, like naming a plane a B-17, though people commonly call it a
Flying Fortress.

Sadly, though, I'm not very good at philosophical writing. I try, but eh, no good.

10 years agoReply

wow im offended

10 years agoReply

Ari Finn

"Every human is a human...except Hitler." That line made me laugh. :D Great job on this chapter. It's really interesting and holds a lot of potential for a longer story.

11 years agoReply

Coen Wonder

Is there a meaning for A2 and B5? Nice piece!

12 years agoReply

Greenjay Reader

Well, I thought that since A & B are side by side as well as the first two letters in the alphabet, I would use A and B, showing how close the two clones are in this story and how they were only the beginning of a whole line of 'letters', or events. As for the numbers, they don't mean anything; afterall, numbers are difficult...

12 years agoReply

Coen Wonder

@Jonathan Jas, Good to know about it.

12 years agoReply

Greenjay Reader

@Coen Wonder, Yeah thanks. Usually I put a lot of little things in my stories. Nice to know someone asked 'bout it.

12 years agoReply

Coen Wonder

@Jonathan Jas, No problem!

12 years agoReply

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