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Nox C
謝謝香淚月大大的讀評！確實正如你所說的一樣，《討厭PvP》一開始的確真的蠻考人耐性的，雖然筆者自己認為還不至於悶場連連，但鋪墊階段怎樣讓故事更加引人入勝實在非常傷腦筋。以劇情來說，你認為25話之前有哪些情節值得再加深描述？雖然我也有幾個想法，但也希望聽聽大家的意見。在第一部連載完結之後一定會回頭改動故事開始時候的章節。

由於最近故事即將進入最高潮的部份，加上因為心臟發生一些問題需要入院診斷和治療的關係，所以四十六話之後的故事會暫停連載一下，趁這段時間希望可以在病床上跟各位多交流一下，如果有什麼建議的話，請務必留言告訴我哦！拜託  :)
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