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1. Interesting cliff hanger. Makes me wanna know about the smiths.
2. The characters are a little flat, there are certain quirks you can give them to make them more interesting. You could look up character traits online, just because Rave lost his memory doesn't mean he lost other areas of personality.
3. Sorry if I seem harsh. If I do... Never ask Brian, otherwise know as Weirdguy to review you. His reviews are brutally honest, nitpicky and harsh, but I was able to fix my chapter so thanks to him.
10 years agoReply
Nice guy, I enjoy our conversations. I think I scare him sometimes, like the time when I explained my profile picture. Fresh is pretty terrifying though, so I'll give him that.
10 years agoReply
SkyWish
Thank you very much!
10 years agoReply
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