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歐娜
加油喔
你感到難過時能跟我講
5 years agoReply
毛鼠之之
整篇文章充滿著感慨和錯過的感覺，我蠻愛這種悲劇呢(超級M)，有帶出女主的感受，而且結尾又很開放式，希望女主角被救回來囉><

可惜的地方是段落分得不太明確喔，有點全部擠在一起的感覺，看文字會有點吃力，不過這也是我個人感受啦，當參考囉OWO

加油!!
5 years agoReply
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