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Sargambelwanshi

It had a hint of Lord of the Rings
And I was actually looking forward for more and it ended.. so i guess its your trailer story

5 years agoReply

Thanks, it is in a way is a trailer. ^-^ Still need to plan out a lot the story to this. Plus this fantasy world will get mentioned in another story of mine called "Look Closer".

5 years agoReply

Sargambelwanshi

@FionaDaydreamer, I'll surely give it a try 😉👍 'cause I'm CURIOUS!

5 years agoReply

@Sargambelwanshi,
Cool! ^-^ then I need to finish writing the first case as soon as possible. After that come the Elvanshee, discovering their world and a bit about the Arthur legend/myth.

5 years agoReply

Sargambelwanshi

@FionaDaydreamer, Wish you luck and speed!

5 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

This is an intriguing concept. Seems tricky with lack of actions

Well done

5 years agoReply

@Tenshi no Yami
Thanks! ^.^
All the info about the elves, dwarfs and further creatures will be mentioned in my supernatural story called "Look Closer". Plus the unique language - having way too much fun creating words and grammar (only for the elves).

5 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@FionaDaydreamer, i was curious about that. Almost went to Google thinking it was lore. Thanks for the insight!

5 years agoReply

@Tenshi no Yami, XD really?
I want to present some magical creatures differently than from what we know from tales, myths and legends. Hence with the dwarfs inspiring in Japan the samurai and their code of honor along with the sharp blades. :-) (nothing with short of statue)
I'm also going to add the Arthur legend from a different perspective and why it's a mystery.

5 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@FionaDaydreamer, i do love me some samurais and swords. I have some at home actuallly...some kunai and stars too 😅

5 years agoReply

@Tenshi no Yami, remind me not to get on your bad side ;-)

5 years agoReply

Tenshi no Yami

@FionaDaydreamer, thats usually hard to do lol. I have a lot of patience but god help anyone who crosses that line 🤔

5 years agoReply

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