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瀧介
其實你重新發佈，我還是會以原本的去評，因為這個算是一個公平性，我看完以後的感想就會寫在留言這裡，然後在把篇章的主要放在題目的留言內做紀錄。

也就是讓你知道一下自己寫的結果，需要哪裡做修改，是在之後再重新寫一個作品，不是我評完了，你再來重新修改，因為這樣你比較能知道自己哪裡出了問題。

因為我是系列創挑，所以之後要是在參與，一樣可以把現在的問題，在下一篇寫好。

那我這篇就不在評了，感謝你😊
6 years agoReply
花火
好的，感謝您的評論。
6 years agoReply
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