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瀧介
精彩的故事，一直都覺得你寫的好好，什麼排版或是錯字我就不想點了，重點是讓讀者能夠得到閱讀的愉悅心情。

雖然是族人之間的故事，銀色頭盔的製造方法居然是以銀幣製成，而沒多大的特殊能力，但當中卻附有重要意義，這樣的文雖有期待，可似乎沒有所謂的熱血成份。

應該說，我確實在閱文時，得到了滿足感，可少了熱血感，你是了解我的😂，熱血、打鬥、更為大場面的炫麗場景之類的，更能夠完全吸引住我，不過剛剛我上面也說了，這篇吸引住我了。

那麼，感謝參與我第二次的創挑，未來系列創挑不管多少人參與，我還會持續開下去的🤭
6 years agoReply
兀心
感謝評語～^^

這一篇從一開始就已經決定要往沒有戰鬥的方向寫，必然會缺乏熱血，這個問題我有考慮到，就看後面的內容能不能扳回來了，幸好結果是好的ＸＤ


6 years agoReply
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@兀心,👍
6 years agoReply
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