I loved it..I really, really do:') When I was reading it the second time, the song Yellow by Coldplay came up on my ipod..Here's to the beautiful orchids of the world!
When I was reading it with the song playing gently to my ears, I felt my heart raining and I cried..maybe you can try reading it again with the song, maybe reading it slowly..I hope you will find how beautiful your writing was!