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KingIllumination
"How Christopher Columbus..." How he what? Just thought I'd point that error out.

You need to describe your characters. What do they look like, how old are they, etc. Only reason I know the MC is a girl is because her name was finally mentioned.

Still pretty interesting story though.
10 years agoReply
jessicreative
Thank you so much for pointing out those errors! I will definitely correct these mistakes.
10 years agoReply
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