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lionmouse
It's getting more descriptive, good!

By the way, when you write a character's thoughts, you should italicize them or find another way to set them apart from the rest of the writing, lest you risk it becoming too confusing for the reader. 
10 years agoReply
Fridge
Thank you for the comment! I'll try harder to organize their thoughts :p Sorry if you had trouble reading it!
10 years agoReply
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