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瀧介
很高興你的參與，不過我還是想要說，內容似乎有點雜亂，一開始的狀況都還不錯，是到中間的部分，變得有那麼一點雜亂，我沒有限制字數，就是給各位一個發展的空間，也不用刻意限制自己的字數，慢慢寫就可以了😊

如果可以之後我還會出這系列的創挑，有機會還能再來參與，再次感謝😊
6 years agoReply
愛睡覺的青丘狐
謝謝，第一次寫這種東西，能有人幫我看看我非常感謝
6 years agoReply
瀧介
@愛睡覺的青丘狐,如果還想多寫一點，希望被指點也能跟我說，因為我創挑通常不那麼嚴苛的評，主要是其他人喜歡或者開心就好😊
6 years agoReply
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