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Purisity'sLove
They are all cowards, I do admit. But...Sylvia will not die. She just seems too important. She makes the story. She makes things interesting. I vote... "_____"
8 年前回覆
shnuffeluv
Sylvia's definitely going to be around a little while longer, yeah.
8 年前回覆
Nor
It's really good! Please publish the next issue soon as I might burst!
8 年前回覆
shnuffeluv
I'm working on it! I've gotta decide who to kill off.
8 年前回覆
Nor
@shnuffeluv, I'd do either beck, G or Tris as they are less likely to become interesting characters.
8 年前回覆
shnuffeluv
I'll keep that in mind!
8 年前回覆
Master Of Fandoms
The whole 9 people plus killer made me think of a video game series though major plot differences both are playing a game with death. Can't wait to read more
8 年前回覆
shnuffeluv
Thanks!
8 年前回覆
HeyItsDoe
This story has a lot of intrigue! I'm really looking forwards to what happens next. The characterization of the characters is on point, considering what people would be thinking during a situation like this. I think to add to the suspense, thrown in sensory details along with the 'texting' (dialogue) so that the reader can really feel where Sylvia is and what she's experiencing. :)
8 年前回覆
shnuffeluv
I'll keep that in mind! It's hard to balance the dialogue against description, and I'll try to include more of it. Thank you for your advice!
8 年前回覆
HeyItsDoe
@shnuffeluv, No problem! I believe this'll turn out very well in the end!
8 年前回覆
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