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穆夙芽
感覺最後一句可以再加四個字作為押韻結尾呢
7 years agoReply
幻
我也正好想到！！！加好友吧！！！
7 years agoReply
穆夙芽
@幻,哈哈，可以的（不過這兩者之間有關聯嗎(╹▿╹)ﾉ？
7 years agoReply
穆夙芽
@幻,感覺可以加「何為歸屬」類似這種的
7 years agoReply
幻
@穆夙芽,哈哈哈
7 years agoReply
幻
不好意思哈哈，修改完畢！
7 years agoReply
空白

這個並不是小詩哦，不過寫得很棒。
小詩格式:十行以下，一百字以下
7 years agoReply
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