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Minz月月
複習留爪(*¯︶¯*)
有了有了豪深情w
7 years agoReply
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補回去，後面就正常很多了！😎
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶 太冷清，來聊一聊，撐撐場面吧～😭😭😭
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
感覺還在鋪陳，靜觀下回解說XD
其實有點不懂地保柱哥是……？
覺得主角可以再描述多一點，還有他是如何看出泉福叔的心思，突然看出來？被提醒看出來？可能我心思太簡單真的沒有看出泉福叔有鬼((汗
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶,地保是一個職業，像黑社會睇場
7 years agoReply
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上兩回一直有說福泉叔的事呢～😭😭😭😭
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because ,咦？不是只有他們的互動嗎，看起來很和諧呀😅😅😅
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶,哦，實在是予先用一句話引出了福泉意圖，｛切莫用騙｝這一句，福泉就發火罵人
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶,另外予先的描寫嘛，多數都是以言行舉止交代，例如他可以把所有貨物送給福泉，又為福泉作保向陳四套交情還叩首一下行一大禮……這些都是描寫
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 喔喔喔喔有，我又回去看，有看到懷疑和試探了！抱歉，第一次沒看清……不過原來隨身帶安眠藥😯😅
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶,我再修改少許吧～😎😎😎
7 years agoReply
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是娘親叫帶的，之後有機會再補一下🤣🤣🤣
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because ,哈哈可能我看的重點都和人不太一樣XD
7 years agoReply
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@月魂伶,不 ，其實我是有心不描寫容貌，這正是留給女主的工作。😍
7 years agoReply
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