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dovidiob84

Awesome.

6 years agoReply

Swansea

Thank you.

6 years agoReply

dovidiob84

It will just make it flow better i think. Let me know what you think of my little piece.

6 years agoReply

Swansea

Done the changes

6 years agoReply

Swansea

Also thank you for your comment. I really appreciate your help. And also thanks in advance for your correction help😁

6 years agoReply

dovidiob84

Hi.
No you don't need to add these headers it makes it more of a draft than an actual finished piece of writing. It's more like you are setting out an idea.

6 years agoReply

Swansea

@dovidiob84,@dovidiob84, are you sure that without headers my Story will be good to read?

6 years agoReply

dovidiob84

@Swanseait@Swanseait depends what you are trying to achieve.if you just want a short example of your writing for this competition then yes. If you wanted to flesh it out into a longer piece then there are things that would need to change. Have you read mine?

6 years agoReply

Swansea

@dovidiob84@dovidiob84 no I didn't yet. OK. I trust your words. I will remove the headers.

6 years agoReply

Swansea

And can you help me correct the errors since I'm not that good in writing!

6 years agoReply

Swansea

I thought ppl needed to know what happened on the night of wedding anniversary. So only mystery reveal. If you think its not needed... Then will the story be complete?

6 years agoReply

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