I like it. Definitely like the way they both bantered with each other and how you described the whole setting and things about him. I like her character too. This got me to chuckle when she said, "Whoa, why are you so hot?" and he just goes, "Why, thank you." It was funny and pretty endearing to me :)
i really loved it... clearly the way it was written.... can you continue it...
It was very off the cuff writing.