I'm experimenting with this style, so your feedback is really valuable. I am working on a version of this story in regular story format, and I'll post that when Tremors is almost finished. (I actually fell in love with this writing style because it helped me focus on the characters, but I can understand how it can be confusing.)
I'm experimenting with this style, so your feedback is really valuable. I am working on a version of this story in regular story format, and I'll post that when Tremors is almost finished. (I actually fell in love with this writing style because it helped me focus on the characters, but I can understand how it can be confusing.)