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黑靈
謝謝小魚詳細的心得～❤️
哈哈，文筆方面，目前在努力學習中，可能你繼續看下去就會有另一番體驗🤣我覺得比起戀愛病的時候，目前的文筆算是進步了一點點🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



加上我的作品內容沒有用任何ai來修飾，所以只能努力學習改善🤣



至於女主，因為我不是內耗的人，所以我的女主的設定都不會是內耗那種。同樣作為讀者的我覺得如果主角都內耗，我會看得很壓抑。

再次謝謝小魚的邀請～
3 days agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝黑靈大大的參與～我的文筆也還在雕琢中，嗚嗚嗚
2 days agoReply
小魚一尾
@黑靈
3 days agoReply
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