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芙
怎麼說，我個人不太看言情或愛情小說所以評的可能不太準，大大也就聽聽就好吧～

首先就是文筆的部分，就和留言區說的一樣沒有什麼華麗的辭藻和太多的形容，我個人是喜歡長篇和長文句的，但看完之後發現原來一行行短句也能讓人很有感觸，這點是這篇文章最好的地方吧。

缺點的話我真的沒辦法講，因為我不太清楚言情的運作方式，例如感情堆疊的時長和互動，所以講了或許也是白說⋯⋯真要說的話就是希望可以看到多一點對兩人外貌的形容吧（個人私心）
10 hours agoReply
小白
謝謝啦，很感謝你告訴我，謝謝啦🥰🥰🥰🥰
10 hours agoReply
芙
@小白,別謝吧論資歷我應該比你淺很多
本來只是想辦辦看互評結果大家都好認真害我有點害怕說錯話⋯⋯
10 hours agoReply
小白
@芙,不會啦，我也是新人，我可以，在你小說下，章章留言，不要寫心得嗎？我真的很不會寫心得，你小說結束後，我寫感想跟你說，這樣可以嗎？
9 hours agoReply
芙
@小白,這樣也可以的～
9 hours agoReply
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