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車有木
感謝參加，以下為我的一些感想，非專業評論，看看便可：

語境純樸而不流於俗套，例如不使用冷暖或顏色來描寫冬季，而是以熱飲的甜來襯托，以及春天並非新生，卻是積存渾沌，是很新穎的發想，也令人回味無窮。

由夏起而至春終，利用整齊的結構，和不同事物區分季節，題目中的「心流」也有心境隨季節流轉之意，營造四季周轉不息，時光不斷前進的氛圍。
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