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你已經有完整的架構和發展，但細節和舖陳不足，口語化亦明顯。

但你只是小六，相比現今電子世代很多人連完整一句話都未能說好呢！多寫多練多看，你長大時應該很了不起
1 month agoReply
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謝謝你！
1 month agoReply
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明天早上6:30準時更新
1 month agoReply
なな
早上就更新阿...好強(我是個一定要拖到最後才要更新的人)
1 month agoReply
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@なな,我是在晚上按了預約發文，早上6:30我根本還未起床
1 month agoReply
なな
@兔言,哇~我六點半可能已經起來了，但我還是不更
1 month agoReply
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@なな,21天就會養成一個習慣，所以堅持更21天就會自動更新了
1 month agoReply
なな
@兔言,實在不想日更...只想周更或雙周更(其實是不定期
1 month agoReply
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@なな,在我創作挑戰的人也說要新手日更-·-
1 month agoReply
なな
@兔言,我是不想努力的新手，所以不用管我
1 month agoReply
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@なな,我的目標是出書，就像我最愛的作者：墨說一樣，他在16歲就出書了，很喜歡他
1 month agoReply
なな
@兔言,那就一起加油吧!
1 month agoReply
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@なな,好喔好喔
1 month agoReply
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@兔言,突然發現我好像說出了我在個人簡介中塗黑的部份😖
1 month agoReply
なな
@兔言,欸...對欸...(今天先下線啦~明天見~}
1 month agoReply
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@なな,明天見，我也該做正事了（功課）
1 month agoReply
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