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楓糖小羊
大家晚安，這裡是楓糖小羊~

真的蠻擔心自己的節奏抓不好我覺得一個好的劇情真的需要適度的鋪墊不然很容易變成沒靈魂的感覺但又擔心太多原創角色會讓人看不懂不過這次出現的一些原創角色一部分是因為我覺得不給他們名字這樣對話起來就會不自然就變成現在有一群原創角色了（雖然一切都是劇情需要
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