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北海沙丁魚
目前看下來很多短句
很有個人風格的好作品🫶
3 days agoReply
沐紫藜
我個人非常喜歡這樣的短斷句，對手機閱讀很友善。而且這篇故事算是低溫敘事，這樣的短句比較可以換氣，不會讓人壓力太大，但有可能會把情緒張力切掉QAQ

謝謝您的分享跟回饋！
2 days agoReply
愛睡覺的小貓
一次看完3章了 ! 老師寫得真的很精采，之後會慢慢補完的。

4 weeks agoReply
沐紫藜
謝謝你的喜歡。
如果還有其他感想或感觸，歡迎留言一起討論。
4 weeks agoReply
愛睡覺的小貓
@沐紫藜,好的～
4 weeks agoReply
Lalaline
枝葉仍青，風一吹，影子就在地上青青搖。 這段好有畫面感 ! (喜歡)
1 month agoReply
沐紫藜
謝謝您的喜歡～
這邊我也覺得畫面很好，但也很心疼被迫長大的靜婉QAQ
1 month agoReply
Lalaline
@沐紫藜,真的 (哭)
1 month agoReply
沐紫藜
@Lalaline,有時候我都會覺得自己超狠，所以每次寫到這類型的部分，都會很悶。
偏偏這部的題材就是要在這種氛圍下才能表現出來(╥﹏╥)
1 month agoReply
Lalaline
@沐紫藜,的確是，創造出來的氛圍我很喜歡

1 month agoReply
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