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愚公
穿越系統流看過很多次了😓

但我認為穿越最初的感官描寫有亮點。
3 months agoReply
車理小龜
亮點明明在最後
3 months agoReply
愚公
@車理小龜,最後的場面是滑稽的，只是我更加欣賞開頭的感官描述吧。

不同人有不同意見，我也不會為了迎合你而說謊。

你總不能強迫我改變自己的感受吧。
3 months agoReply
車理小龜
@愚公,沒有，就是說說XD本來就只是一個腦洞
3 months agoReply
愚公
@車理小龜, 哈哈，這個腦洞其實也令人意想不到。
3 months agoReply
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