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小船兒
有了自主意識的主角看來也是作者play的一環😂可惡的作者（！？）其實自然老死的結局很理想，只是過程中受盡折磨，看來是想讓他發瘋多於死得痛快。
故事的概念很有趣，令讀者不禁想像自己身處現實世界的情形，我們都是自己劇本裏的主角。
情緒展現在描寫主角一心向死的部分稍為有感覺，還可以再寫濃烈一些。
8 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
等等，這人是...!?
8 months agoReply
原子能
被你發現了
8 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
@原子能,你藏在這裡誰看的到啦XD

8 months agoReply
原子能
@伐伐伐木工,還是被你發現了
8 months agoReply
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